Developmental Editing for Character-Driven Stories

Helping writers transform unpolished drafts into market-ready manuscripts

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Why Authors Work With Me

Emotional Insight

I look beyond surface-level fixes to uncover the emotional and structural issues preventing your story from reaching its full potential.

Actionable Feedback

Clear recommendations you can immediately implement.

Story Expertise

Identification of the structural issues holding your manuscript back.

Collaborative Process

Your voice remains at the center of every decision.

What is Developmental Editing?

Developmental editing focuses on the big-picture elements of your manuscript. It strengthens the foundation that holds your story together.

  • Character arcs

  • Plot Structure

  • Pacing

  • Conflict and tension

  • Point of view

  • Emotional impact

  • Reader Engagement

Rather than correcting grammar or punctuation, developmental editing examines:

Think of it as architectural planning for your story. Before polishing the paint and fixtures, we make sure the foundation is strong!

Developmental Editing

  • Story

  • Structure

  • Character

  • Pacing

  • Emotional Impact

vs

Copy Editing

  • Grammar

  • Syntax

  • Consistency

  • Clarity

  • Style

Every story deserves the chance to become the version readers can’t stop thinking about.

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  • "I absolutely appreciate Kaylee's level of professionalism and commitment to helping writers/authors. Not only is she kind and approachable, her style of feedback doesn't leave room for confusion. She knows her stuff! "

    William M., Fantasy Author

  • "Kaylee is an incredibly communicative and thoughtful editor. She is quick to respond, and timely in her delivery. Her feedback is intentional and balances what is working and where opportunities still exist. Where your manuscript needs additional development, her feedback is targeted and actionable."

    Amanda A., Romantasy Author

  • "I had a few friends who are also writing professionals, following her TikTok page, and I trust their opinions. Kaylee did not disappoint!"

    Anonymous Author

  • "Kaylee's feedback was incredibly helpful. I truly appreciate the level of detail she put into the editorial letter and in-line comments. She is very thorough!"

    Maddy B., Suspense Author

  • "I follow Kaylee on TikTok and have enjoyed her content, delivery, and focus areas. I communicated with several editors and Kaylee was incredibly responsive, professional and encouraging."

    Anonymous Author

  • Kaylee is professional and very communicative. Doesn’t leave you guessing and answers everything!"

    Monica A., Memoir Author

How It Works

  • Complete the inquiry form and tell me about your manuscript, your goals, and where you are in the writing process.

  • I’ll review your project and recommend the service that best fits your needs, whether that’s a full developmental edit, manuscript evaluation, story diagnostic, etc.

  • You’ll receive a custom proposal outlining the scope of work, timeline, pricing, and payment options so you know exactly what to expect.

  • Once the contract is signed and your deposit is paid, your project is officially booked and added to my calendar.

  • When your start date arrives, I’ll dive into your manuscript and provide thoughtful, actionable feedback designed to help you elevate your story with confidence!

Let’s elevate your story together!

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